Młodzieżowe Forum Edukacyjne - Angielski

naciunia7 · Wiek: 16 Dołączyła: 07 Lip 2009 Posty: 75 Skąd: Koło

Obiecuję, ze jakoś to wynagrodzę

Proszę kogoś o skorygowanie błędów w pisowni, a szczególnie w gramatyce. Sama nieźle się napracowałam przy tym, ale i tak nie jest na pewno dobrze. Pomożecie?

I want to tell about my fovourite film ‘Twilight’ based on book with The same title. A moment ago, you could see an interview with Stephenie Meyer – the author of the book, Kristen Stewart and Robert Pattinson – actors play the role of Bella and Edward.
First, I give you general informations about this film.
It appeared in cinemas at 17th of November 2008 (in Poland at 9th of January 2009) directing by Catherine Hardwicke. It tell a story about life of Bella Swan, normal girl, who fall in love with a vampire called Edward Cullen. Bella had to choose between life and death, family and boyfriend. Only she knew the true about Cullen’s family.
And now, about interview.
In MovieFon studio met the most important and famous people of the ‘Twilight’. They talked about film, their experiences and plans. They asked themselves questions sent by fans. The first question was from Annie. She asked Kristen, how she identify with Bella. Actress answer that she only played and she didn’t especially pay attention to it. Next, Kristen asked Rob about his most difficult scene. He answer that it was a scene in which he had to flash someone a demonic look. Then question got to Stephenie Meyer: on what scene she most waited for? It turned out that it was a meeting of Edward and Bella on clearing. From the next questions, we could find out about a various things of our stars. For example: Kristen would like to give Mowgli from a Jungle book her voice, rob can’t find a think, which no one know. Kristen said that she was very surprised when she got a role of Bella in ‘Twilight’. Then Stephanie tell viewers about her dreams with Edward and Bella in a leading role. The greatest fun caused next question or actually request. Kristen wanted to see Rob’s best sexy face. He was disappointed because he thought that he was doing it all the time. Next, conversation moved on to Stephenie’s plans topic. We found out that she intend to publish her next book not until two or three years. Sara from Portugal request Kristen for description of Rob only in two words. She said: ‘He is a good actor’. After that Stephenie talked about her similarity and differences with Bella. Next laugh evoked Kristen’s answer on Jena’s question about the funniest moment during filming. Kristen called herself ‘gorilla’ because rob couldn’t pick her up from the floor. Finally Rob thanked Kristen and Stephenie for a successful interview.
The next interview lead journalist from themovieguy with Robert Pattinson. They were talking about various things. First they talked about typical, dangerous scenes which Rob had to play as a vampire. Next, Rob talked how big surprise for him was such big popularity of ‘Twilight’. He didn’t expect that a role of Edward made him such popular. Finally, they talked about kisses. Rob explained, why Edward waited so long to kiss Bella.
And on this thing, I finish my speech about ‘Twilight’.

krawol · Dołączył: 22 Mar 2009 Posty: 30 Skąd: Zduńska Wola

Zależy Ci jeszcze na sprawdzeniu tego? Bo nie wiem czy mam czytać, gdyż już jest trochę po terminie.

naciunia7 · Wiek: 16 Dołączyła: 07 Lip 2009 Posty: 75 Skąd: Koło

już nie musisz, jakoś sobie poradziłam

ale jeśli masz czas to chętnie zobaczę swoje błędy, żeby ich więcej nie robić

CirrS · Wiek: 18 Dołączył: 22 Wrz 2008 Posty: 19 Skąd: Stąd...

Jeśli tylko znajdę chwilę, też chętnię pomogę.

naciunia7 · Wiek: 16 Dołączyła: 07 Lip 2009 Posty: 75 Skąd: Koło

dziękuję wam bardzo za chęci

krawol · Dołączył: 22 Mar 2009 Posty: 30 Skąd: Zduńska Wola

I want to tell about my fovourite film (grzeczniej będzie powiedzieć I would like to tell) ‘Twilight’ based on book with The same title. Not so long time ago you could see an interview with Stephenie Meyer – the author of the book. Kristen Stewart and Robert Pattinson are actors who played the role of Bella and Edward.
Firstly, I will tell you some general information about this film.
It appeared in the cinemas at 17th of November 2008 (in Poland at 9th of January 2009) directed by Catherine Hardwicke. It tells about Bella Swan's life, normal girl, who fell in love with a vampire called (skoro to jego imię i nazwisko to nie powinno być called tylko name) Edward Cullen. Bella had to choose between life and death, family and boyfriend. Only she knew the true about Cullen’s family.

Na razie tyle później sprawdzę resztę bo czas mnie goni.
Pogrubioną czcionką są poprawione błędy i uwagi.